Former President Cory Aquino who did not managed to extend her stay on earth loosing in a colon cancer battle to the diseases has past away recently, and the Funeral of Cory Aquino, the said Mother of Democracy in the Philippines is just a sleep away, scheduled for tomorrow, Wednesday , August 5, 2009.
Aquino has served the Philippines well even prior her reign as the first woman president of the Philippines; where she has led the People Power 1 -a non-violent movement by the masses- during the Marcos Era. Her death burdens many, from the far edge of Luzon down to Mindanao, you can see the color yellow, almost everywhere, a yellow ribbon significant to Cory’s life, as this was the color that symbolizes her best and makes people remind of her best.
President Arroyo therefore declared the former President Cory Aquino Funeral dated August 5, 2009, a Wednesday to be a non-working holiday, which means majority, if not all schools will have their off tomorrow.
Reduce your running sentences. Your sentences are too long and you are abusing the use of commas. Please proofread your articles well before publishing them.
I’m very sorry for my editors very poor write-up, rest assured he’ll do better next time.
It’s nice to hear that.
There are some sites that require at least two people to proofread the article before they post it. The person who made the article and another editor.
That way, they can collaborate and discuss sections of the post that needs improvement.
lol.. I wish I have editors like these guys.. ^_^ now, I don’t wanna post a comment in english…
anywayz… RIP Tita Cory…. and condolence to the family, as well as to the whole country…