Do you want to be our proofreader? LOL. Email me.

Within the second paragraph, "aka as"=also known as as?

Then, "calls himself as merely someone only “lucky”"=Merely & only seem a bit redundant if they're syntactically framed this way. Either drop the "merely", put a direct quote if that's how Teng phrased it or place "merely" before "calls".

Next, you don't start a sentence with a conjunction, i.e. but in the 2nd sentence of the 3rd paragraph. Maybe you could have changed the period to a comma. If that would've made it a run-on sentence, you could've changed "but" to sentence starters like "However", "Conversely", "On the other hand though", etc.

You started two consecutive sentences with "Jeric sees his father…" Hmmm…There's no rule against that, but it looks a bit childish in writing style. It's only in that part! Like I said, someone should have proofread.

It should be WHOM we can really call or who CAN REALLY BE CALLED.

Other than the grammatical errors, this was a well-worded article. The information shared was good, and you asked fairly interesting questions. *He didn't answer so invitingly. Haha*

Good effort! Next time, someone should proofread. The burden of creativity & research is thrown at the writers, and the least favor that can be done for them (besides citing them upon publishing of the article), is to edit their(the writers') final draft to give one heck of a solid blog!